tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1399581338217409917.post8344181223246653016..comments2023-04-12T02:22:06.250-07:00Comments on Listen Sweetie!: Page One. . .Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1399581338217409917.post-46117529794516905052010-05-18T21:14:05.027-07:002010-05-18T21:14:05.027-07:00YAY you guys are alive!
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your critiques are awe...YAY you guys are alive!<br />:-)<br />your critiques are awesome! thanks so much<br /><br />the original plan was to have the book start very mute and boring and as the story progresses it'll get more colorful and fun. <br />(I just realized you dont know the story) <br />So for now it's supposed to be a little bland because it's what provokes the adventure part of the story. after a boring, green life He notices a juicy red apple and a trail of orange mushrooms and flowers, fascinated, he follows it and finds a gypsy/ witch in a clearing full of bright and colorful things. He learns that she made it all that way with a magic paint brush and he manages to steal it and then he magically "paints" the forest all sorts of different colors and patterns everywhere....<br />anyways i can warm him up a little but i don't want to get too much because i want to set the "mood" of boring-nessHollie L. Hibberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03792474149171036959noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1399581338217409917.post-3502735938415448152010-05-18T19:43:52.191-07:002010-05-18T19:43:52.191-07:00I like the design of it. I am a huge fan of good ...I like the design of it. I am a huge fan of good white space... I am working on figuring that out myself...haha.adam taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01035482253729918751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1399581338217409917.post-41435131236025233212010-05-18T11:43:15.638-07:002010-05-18T11:43:15.638-07:00I think that I like it. It is hard to tell without...I think that I like it. It is hard to tell without the text though. It might be a little too dull. It could maybe use a touch more warmth here and there. But I am not totally decided on that yet. The grayness works for a foggy effect but maybe a touch more color on the ogre would help and maybe just a little bit on the tree.Veronica Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15012137036864033600noreply@blogger.com