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Tuesday, January 19, 2010

It's cold!!!


I'd like a critique before I post it on my blog por favor.

5 comments:

  1. I like it. The sky texture is a lot of fun and the drawing is really cool. It get's confusing with the fire coming in from of that man's face That is the only area not working for me

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  2. So what would be your recommendation? I've tried a few things and am going nuts.

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  3. It just feels like I want to see the guy behind there. And his yellow might be a little intense.

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  4. (this is erin impersonating adam) i'd like the stripes to be a different color- still a warm color but red and white is too insta-candy cane and im tired of christmas. i like the train. and the sky. it looks like it has a really light texture in the sky and it would be nice to see it everywhere- paper texture or something, to make the stark white snow just a little gritty

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  5. all i can think of when i see the fire is the "20.000 leagues under the sea" scene from the pagemaster "IT'S A GIANT SQUID!"""
    so change the fire colors and show the shadow the train 'should' be showing, just for consistancy with your characters.

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