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Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Critique PLEASE!!!!

Another concert poster I'm working on. Please help me out before I have the type put on.


  1. i like the background, think its working great. the line work seems a little too clean though and a little too light weight. maybe try going over it again with a little bit scratchier brush or duplicating that layer a few times to rough it up a little. really like the color of the sky at the top- that same color would be great in the dino- its really close but i like the warmer shade up top.

  2. it gets a little confusing in the area where the eyeball is on the horn, bring the light or dark value on the other side of the eye so it will frame it

  3. I don't know what it is going to say, but so far it is hilarious. The ewoke adventures were terrible. "Me Find!"