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Friday, March 5, 2010

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I would really appreciate a critique on this one!

3 comments:

  1. I would like to see the perspective pushed. Also it might be interesting to see the numbers pushed more in space. Make some seem really far away and maybe see only part of one of the numbers really close up so that it takes up a lot of the format.

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  2. i agree with veronica. this is a tough one with all those floaties everywhere. i would push the size variation with the numbers. the order in which you've placed the numbers makes sense except the 10 and the 9. maybe make the 8, 9, 10 smaller? just make sure the 9 is no where near the 5 cuz that really confused me at first, i do like your textures and line work though. :-)

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  3. also, where do you want us to look first? the 1 or the 10? just something to consider, cuz i started following the 1

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