...This is quite possibly a snapshot of your brain...
Can I see it bigger? drop the gradient ...tacky!!! mostly it might need to be desaturated to make the characters pop a bit more.The gradient thing is just a personal thing. I like solid colors. It is the hip thing to do...hahaha I really like that girl character
Ya I agree with Adam, you should drop the gradient. GIve it a nice light cool color. Have you thought about hand writing your own type instead of using one? I think it would make a greater connection.
i really like the girl character a lot! she's very strong! and i agree with adam and cliff, no gradient, and i think i'd make the type's distance between the top and the bottom the same. make your name a tad bit bigger, and play with the font a bit more. but again i think your character is really fun to look at. :-)