I thought it would be easier to show you than tell you. I didn't like the back section, it was boring. It needs more story of some kind... is she trapped in the tower. Does she want to go sailing on the river? Is there something/someone she is watching?
I think it is the hair and the body that I like. The face is boring and lacks emotion and direction
ReplyDeleteI like the simpleness of it. Just tighten it up and be finished.
ReplyDeleteYou are right, simple is good. Boring... not so much
ReplyDeleteyeah, i agree. i think the lack of a story is why i stopped. I was going to do something with a prince climbing up the tower only to discover that she's hideously ugly or something, but this is what came out (i was watching SNL, and i think it fried my brain)....(never going to do that again!)
ReplyDeletethink i'll start over...
thanks adam and cliff!