...This is quite possibly a snapshot of your brain...
My initial response is his jacket is too dark compared to the foreground elements. Your stuff is killer though buddy!
Good call Cliff. I will play with a few things and see if I can the foreground to work a little better.
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I think both of the adults need to be elongated a bit more. They're too short for their head sizes.
I am working on all those comments/changes. I have just been really busy and also waiting on the contract to be all finished up. No work until I get a number and a signature. so there...
I had to start over on this page, but I will put up the new version when it is done....or at least close.