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Saturday, January 9, 2010
More Refined
I got rid of the Grand Teton and changed the color of her blouse. I still need to figure out a pattern for the quilt and i refined the jack-a-lope. I don't want to touch the foreground hand, but i'll get to it eventually. nit-picky time :-)
I think that you should change the size of the arm. It is the same size as the belly and it repeats the shape of it with the elbow looking similar to the belly button. Does that make sense?
Good job on the fixes, it is still a little weird that the jackolope is so far from his face and yet the face is all squished up. Keep playing with the color of the mom's clothes.
the colors get a little confusing to me also- the baby's shirt is green and follows the same shape as the grass behind, especially under the jackalope foot. the inside of the jackalope's ear is flesh toned and i thought it was the baby's neck for a long time.
I think that you should change the size of the arm. It is the same size as the belly and it repeats the shape of it with the elbow looking similar to the belly button. Does that make sense?
ReplyDeleteP.S. That Jack-o-lope is so cute. I mean just adorable.
ReplyDeleteGood job on the fixes, it is still a little weird that the jackolope is so far from his face and yet the face is all squished up. Keep playing with the color of the mom's clothes.
ReplyDeletethe colors get a little confusing to me also- the baby's shirt is green and follows the same shape as the grass behind, especially under the jackalope foot. the inside of the jackalope's ear is flesh toned and i thought it was the baby's neck for a long time.
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