The far right cloud is going up on the bottom side and I think it might be better just going straight across.
The soft transitions between the very top dark pink to the other lighter pink seems too soft and I wonder if adding some more gritty texture would help.
That is all the nit picky annoying stuff that I came up with.
I really like this painting! Very nice. I love how simply you tell that story of that little boy.
Wow! This is really beautiful.
ReplyDeleteA few small tweaks...
ReplyDeleteThe far right cloud is going up on the bottom side and I think it might be better just going straight across.
The soft transitions between the very top dark pink to the other lighter pink seems too soft and I wonder if adding some more gritty texture would help.
That is all the nit picky annoying stuff that I came up with.
I really like this painting! Very nice. I love how simply you tell that story of that little boy.