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Monday, March 29, 2010

Work Tme


So I have been super busy and I apologize. However, I need your help so critique please. I'm not worried about lighting in this just design. Shapes on shapes so please take the time and give me your two cents.

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  1. at first glance i wasn't too sure about the lamp post in the dead center of the painting. but after a while i am starting to like it. just be careful that the trees and the post aren't on the same plane. it's a little confusing. I think if the shorter tree was in front of the post as well, it would help push the post back. but i love the pallette, and how that crazy greenness leads the eye everywhere and how all the other elements reinforce it. awesome, the end

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  2. its fun- the yellow post on the right side stops right at the tree branch though, is it a light also? just want to see the top of it somewhere so it isnt a mystery...i cant stand the suspence

    -erin who is too lazy to sign in and thinks that you should consider moving to NYC with us this summer

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  3. p.s. adam and i agree that unless POOP is in there for content reason that the text is distracting. dont let dumbs read illustrations, make them look at pictures! its the best part

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